It will happen eventually and your heart will be broken but that's love we have to stay strong and move on, excellent poem 5/5

This is soo good! I loved the way you set that up! Awesome job love!
xoxo

I agree with Karl on this one. You really showed what could happen to your heart in this one, but if your touched by love, its worth the risk.
In response to your comment, i'm not angry at all, lol. I know it wasn't my best, i wrote it in five minutes flat to get it on time, lol. Plus trying to write around a title is a bit hard, hehe
5/5 as always
*Gem*

Hey,,gr8 poem,, it is rele nice,, there is no such thing as love if there is no hurt,, in order to love, u have to hurt,,thats the way it goes,,oh and i kind of dont mind about u using my poem,,but dont put it as ur work plz,, if u use it,, i hope ur mom likes it.

Wow, great write. Different style, but I totally understood what you were trying to get at my love.

Really enjoyed this poem. Great job! Take Care Cindy

Great job! I liked this one a lot. Thanks for the great comments! =] Thank you for adding me to yor favs!

♥Ciao

Comment #2:

This was just incredible! I mean, so powerful and deep. And it amazingly didn't seem repetitive. You weren't just saying the same thing 100 different ways, and that can be hard to do when you are describing things that all apply to one subject. Anyways, great, great, great (times a million) job! :)
~Midnight Sun

Aweh I loved this, the only thing that bothered me about this piece is the repetition of the "never" I don`t know, it is still very well written, the last two lines really summed it up great.

5.5
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