So, Here's To Going Back. [Freestyle]

by BrixGoesxRawr   Jan 4, 2007


Baby, I'm yours
You should never doubt that
We may argue & we may fight
But we always work our way through

Don't be scared of losing me
Stop being so jealous all the time
Baby, I promise you. .
I'll always be yours. I'm not going anywhere.

I miss the way it used to be
When you and I always got along
Never once did we fight
Just full of smiles & laughter

I want to go baby. . Go back
To how things were, how they used to be
Before I went and messed it all up
I'm truly sorry for what I did

I may not understand you sometimes
But I do understand this
I'll always love you with all my heart
& I wouldn't leave you for anything

Baby, I want to stop all this fighting
It's driving me insane
Every second that goes by, I get more scared
I don't want to lose you, baby. . I can't

So grab my hand, & hold on tight
We're going back to where we went wrong
No more fighting, baby. We're going to be okay
So here's to going back. . To laughter & smiles.

Brianna Carter
January 4, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Hey thank you soo much for entering this in my contest!! i really liked reading it because it was a true poem from the heart that you really just poured your thoughts and feelings into. Personally i think you said the word baby too much, but in a way it actually makes the poem seem more powerful. My favourite part was the ending. It was a good strong ending and i loved it!! well done, you have great talent and style :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I find this a very unique sort of style that I was once really good at. Really liked what you have written here Breezy, it all flowed so well, and it didn't seem like you stumbled anywhere at all. I'm not sure why it was voted so low, but I will vote this a 5 because it's different. Creative and very.. meaningful.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Although this poem lacked flow, I loved the emotion you showed. The depth and heart were amazing throughout. Nicely done, Brianna. =). 4.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. this poem described exactly what I'm going through right now. EXACTLY. lol. You did such an amazing job on this. Especially for a freestyle. I love this. You did a really good job on expressing the way that you felt and describing the situation that you two are in. Great job on this. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    It stole some of my text!
    *It really hit home hard

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