This was also good.You poured your feelings out in this. Good job!

Freestyle worked well for this poem. Good job. I'm going to have to read some more of your poetry, just because this one was so tastefully done.

I loved this one.
It really hit home hard

It stole some of my text!
*It really hit home hard

Wow.. this poem described exactly what I'm going through right now. EXACTLY. lol. You did such an amazing job on this. Especially for a freestyle. I love this. You did a really good job on expressing the way that you felt and describing the situation that you two are in. Great job on this. 5/5

Although this poem lacked flow, I loved the emotion you showed. The depth and heart were amazing throughout. Nicely done, Brianna. =). 4.5/5

I find this a very unique sort of style that I was once really good at. Really liked what you have written here Breezy, it all flowed so well, and it didn't seem like you stumbled anywhere at all. I'm not sure why it was voted so low, but I will vote this a 5 because it's different. Creative and very.. meaningful.

Hey thank you soo much for entering this in my contest!! i really liked reading it because it was a true poem from the heart that you really just poured your thoughts and feelings into. Personally i think you said the word baby too much, but in a way it actually makes the poem seem more powerful. My favourite part was the ending. It was a good strong ending and i loved it!! well done, you have great talent and style :)