Space of Your Soul

by TheRapture03   Jan 5, 2007


Can you see what I'm saying,
In the words that I speak?
Do you want to hear lies,
Or is it truth that you seek?

Can you see through the storm,
That has blinded us all?
Are you on the other side,
Standing behind the wall?

Is there room to spare,
Inside the space of your soul?
Would you let me in,
Or leave me in the cold?

The world that is yours,
Will it ever be ours?
Will you show me your beauty,
Or even your scars?

Will you stay in the dark,
Or come out to the light?
I'd never give you up,
Not with out a fight.

But in the midst of this all,
There are words I can't find.
But you've helped me to search them out,
And to see them shine.

Can you see the light,
Or is it hidden from your eyes?
Have you found the truth
Or is it still shrouded in lies?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Now this poem is absolutely wonderful. The flow was flawless and the rhymes were great. I really enjoyed this piece. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I like in this poem how you asked questions it gives it more tension in it! well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber

    I Really Like This One...