Wow thats absoultely perfect poem a++++ lol dont worry about my titles do commet on someone elses poems dont forget to commet because someone elses needs it more then i

Hey wow... that poem is really awesome... I know a few people like that so it kind of gets to me.. *tear*... keep up the good work... Awesome job though... I enjoyed it very much...

***MyPoems*
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*WouldYouEvenCare(OfCourseNot-IKnow*
*BrokenLove*
*OneWithoutTheOtherJustWon'tWork*
*ToMyMom*

Wow! This is great! The message is great for teens. I think this poem will do just fine. Your teacher will probably love it, cos' I do! Hehe! Anyway, I found nothing wrong with it! Great job! I loved the last stanza!
5/5

I like it. it was very good. if ur looking for all i really can think of is somthing like "falling star"

Excellent job to be so young (well so much younger than me I should say.lol). Pain pills are powerful and can be very addictive. I like the way you wrote this. Keep writing!

That really was a good poem. it told such a tragic story in its line. powerful cause i could almost imaging following the same path as him. making the same mistakes. and i like how the last 2 lines say he'll survuve but never be the same. good work

Rocky

Another great poem, but so sad,
i love the way you express your self, you have a very different talent in a good way though.
keep it up so i can come back read more.

Awww. Omg, that was so sad!! & I'm sure it's actually happend to a lot of people. It brought tears to my eyes.. Really. It was very very very sad, lol.. I'm speechless! It was just like, perfect!! This is one of my favorites from you so far. :]] It was excellent. & It flowed well too. Amazing job. -Claps- XD. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x 5.5

Splendid...i enjoyed that one thoroughly it was well written

5/5

You put across a strong message, and it works in this case! which many dont!

well done, keep it up

What an original work of art! Beautiful poetry! 5/5
♥
~Stephen White

This is beautiful 5/5!

This leaves me speachless... girl ... you are really a good writter... this poem felt so real... with the words you used.. and the way you described them... keep it up!