Three Words Too Late

by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи   Jan 5, 2007


I wrote this poem 2 years ago and i had hundreds of votes and comments on it and it was erased.. and now if you google it you can find it, so now i can't prove it's mine. so i had to rewrite it by notes and memory, hope you all still like it as much as before, and if you remember it from way back then pleeeese leave a comment saying so :) it would be a lot of help because someone else on this site also claimed it as theirs.

A boy and a girl
The best of friends
From elementary to high school
Weekdays and weekends

Throughout all the years
Their friendship grew
They both felt the same
But neither knew

Each waking moment
Since the day that they met
They both loved each other
Sunrise to sunset

He was all she had
In her terrible life
He was the one
Who kept her from the knife

She was his angel
She made him smile
Though life threw him curves
She made it all worth the while

Then one rainy day
Things went terribly wrong
These next few hours
Were like a very sad song

See he made the girl jealous
On purpose he tried
When she asked Do you love her?
On purpose he lied

His plan was working
But he had no clue
Just how wrong things would go
The damage he'd do

He stopped hanging out with her
She felt so alone
Just her and the blade
No one was home

She dialed his number
He answered "Hello"
She told him she loved him
Then hung up the phone

At first he was stunned
Couldn't believe what he heard
His whole life was changed
By just those three words

He raced to her house
But came a minute to late
She was lying in a pool of blood
And her heart had no rate

Beside her was a note
And in it her confession
Her love for this boy
Her only obsession

Shock came over him
As he stared at the knife
What had he done
He'd taken her life

As he read the note over and over
He choked back the tears
It wasn't supposed to be this way
After waiting all these years

He kissed her forehead softly
Then broke down and cried
Picked up her knife
And that night they both died

She was found in his arms
On her bloodstained bed
Under her note
His handwriting said

"I loved her so
She never knew,
All this time
I loved her too"

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  • 6 years ago

    by Eric

    Some poems are immortal. That was a rare one.

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    This is so sad and so well written...superb write 10/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Very moving, i love every line =D

  • 16 years ago

    by jessica warrick

    Beautiful.
    i almost cried.
    well done, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Omg this poem is so very sad i was almost in tears i love this poem its long but not boring, the emotion was strong great write!!...5/5..=]

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