by Cindy
Very sad yet beautiful! Excellent job! |
Yeah, i remember reading this a long time ago... You still got me stunned. I love it! .. even thought its kinda sad. You did an amazing job at this. the rhyme... the flow.. amazing! I didn't find anything wrong. Simply amazing. |
5/5, Wow. I know why it became a chain letter on myspace. It has so much emotions and such a carried high sensation that they both loved eachother but they never knew how much the other one loved the other one. Not making sense but yeah. This is quite a sad poem!. Keep up the great work!!. |
by Rona
I thought that was just amazing! I certainly felt the sadness in this poem. It made me realize how not to do things without thinking it through or we may pay the price afterwards. I loved it! Just a few things I thought I should point out: |
Tragically very sad, but very well written |
by Rona
Ack! My comment was cut off! |
I love this poem. I remember reading it last year and i liked it so much I saved it. so i have your original one if you would like it. But honestly both are really good. good job. |
Wow, i'm actually crying here! i cant believe that i never read this before! and i dunno how the original was, but this one is great! |
by Faith Davis
This sounds like me and a friend but we didnt die. When i heard this i started to cry and kno people will kno wat i feel like inside |
by ALEX
I remember seeing this on other sites, thinking what a great poem it is. Glad i can finally congratulate the author! This is an amazing poem. |
by Stephy
Simply beautiful. I absoluetly adore it. this one and the original. |
by Toni
Absolutely beautiful hun, hope you're ok havent been on here in a while xxxx |
by x in love x
I think all ure poems and quotes are really good, and im relieved that im not the only one feelin like this. thanx |
by Kaila
Awww this was so sad...it was a great write your amazing!! |
by Just Lisa
Aww, I love this poem! I wanna cry LOL! It's awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . . you're awesome :0)! |
Wow this was an amazing poem it was the first time i read it and i loved it!!! |
by Birgit
Oh My Gosh! This is so beautiful. Keep up the good writing! |
Beautiful poem. Good work. Keep it up. |
This one made me cry...no joke..i felt a tear drop. |
Oh my god, this is immensely moving, an absolutely BRILLIANT poem, one of the best I have ever had the joy of reading, trulky this is a fantastic piece of work, touching, strong, and it calls to a part that exists inside each one of us. I truly love it. Please, write more! |