Good job! The emotion you have put in to this can really be felt by the reader.

But it better not be realistic for i am one who cares ...put it off ... for me ?

I love your poetry! great emotion! keep it up

Ur poem was very good, i like it a lot, i could also relate 2 it, but it would have made it better if u actually wrote wat u were going 2 do but u still get a 5/5

Sweet. again nice and well expressed :D

xxx alex xxx