This was an excellent poem it made mel augh near the end, what goes around comes around it is so very true, excellent job 5/5

Inspiring poem of someone turning their life around. It's good to be able to be proud of yourself. Nice job!

I love the way it shows how uve been reborn after a tough time, and i love the way its written too.
well done x rob

This one is good.. and sad but i like how it is written