Love????

by Sheyvonne   Jan 5, 2007


What is love???
I cant tell you
people say they love you
but why would they
lie, cheat, and break your
heart????
Why Why Why?
No one knows what love is
from my experiences
love can make you smile,
cry, and feel the worst
at times.
Everything in the relationship
goes so good
then, he go and mess it up
over something stupid.
Is it love if someone will hurt you
once, twice, so many times
that u still love them but
feels like there is no more room
for the pain and the deceit.
Is it love???

This is my 1st poem so please read it...this is just a freestyle
so if a strayed off a little bit excuse me it was all coming from my head thanx please rate!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by LadyLk

    For a freestyle this is amazing!! That being said, if you took the time to fix it up a little afterwards, it could have been flawless!! ;) Next time you've got a freestyle, write it out and try to see where you can put more emphasis on the emotion to bring it out. Just keep rereading it, it'll come to you, especially if it's as good as this off the top of ur head (and heart) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Um i liked it bujt i think you should make it more in depth like make me feel all of your confussion

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