Shimmering hope

by ryan   Jan 5, 2007


You've made everything so clear
all I want is for you to be here
I know by age we're far apart
but all the same you've stolen my heart
I didn't think I'd ever have the chance
I stared at you and hoped you thought I glanced.
He left you and your heart such in a mess
I picked it up and put mess together.
I know that you are so afraid
I want you to know you shouldn't be today.
If you let me in i'm gonna be here
no other girl will get ever get near
I waited so long for just one chance
my only question is will you dance
and share the chance of a lifetime
i'll different than others. Pain can't touch us.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    This is a really sweet poem, filled with so much hope i really loved it and the rhyming was great to. keep up the great work. that girl should feel very lucky!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sari

    I liked it...It was real sweet, something from the heart. Makes me glad to know there are still some sweet guys out there and that not all of them are jerks...

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    Thats really cute!
    good choice of words and rhyme.
    good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by keirstin

    Ah'wwww thats cute and sad but still really good ilove it

  • I love it its sooo sweet and romantic
    i think i just feel in love lol