HEY KID THIS IS GOOD....LOL......WELL DONE

You are a fantastic writer alot reminds me of me, lol.

Great poem, u r one of the few writers ive read that manages to use generic rhymes effectively, well doneeeeo

Hey, that was really wicked. i loved your wording. chin up hun xoxo

Dam you are friggin good. that is all i have to say. i am left speechless..... love sam

I love you

What a very sad poem. Your pain can be felt in the words you have penned. Great job!
Take care Cindy

This reminds me of the stuff i have written great write pain makes a great subject in poems
-laura-

I can relate to my heart being cold, but not dead. I think we inflict a lot of the pain on ourselves by not speaking up and saying how we really feel. Also you can't say that you will never love again because you don't know who you will be passing by. She may not h ave been the one for you, but she may have taught you some things to get ready for the one you are to love and to be in love with.

Oh my Gosh...really...nice,very nice. Wounded, weary hearts everywhere, eh?