Wow this is really good! i love how u have the two perspectives! i wish all guys felt bad haha for raping women

Great poem broken, sorry i only got round to commenting now, very good idea on the two perspectives, keep up the good work

This is really clever, the two personas are a great idea. one thing i'm just confused is he raping her b/c she says "i love you" so i was a bit unsure, well done on this great poem tho

This one is absoultely amazing. so well written. you have done a great job of expressing both opinions of what happened. great great great xx

I like..its very good...you have good emotion in this poem.

This poem is soooo good i love it!!!

Great poem, I rarely comment any one on their works but yours was the kind that just couldn't go without.

Please write the first part soon. i can't wait!!

Awesome, i really liked how you wrote it from two purspectives! you have inspired me and given me new ideas thank you

Wow this was a really good poem! i like how you had the 2 people kinda thing goin! great poem

I like how the poem includes two points of view very well done with that as well as with the descriptive words.

I love it, ur a genious. especially with the two different perspectives!

Oh wow...at first reading it i was getting a little bored to be honest but the last line told me i had to write a comment i love it! (Not the rape the poem) Your creativity is amazing! keep up the good work!

Amazing perspectives,
flawless words.

That poem really gets to me it reminds me of what my ex did to me and it explains exactly how it was for me i love it 5/5!

PLZ comment one of my poems please!