Comments : Everything lasts forvever

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Good write Amanda
    I do believe you have some spelling errors and at time this poem lost its flow, but over all good dedication to your lover!
    Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    Nice poem
    check out mine...if u like it leave a comment or just rate it ..i will appreciate it