What an emotional poem, a really sad story and im genuinely sorry

Lovely writing Em, my black heart goes out to you.
hg

Matt

I have tears in my eyes...
This was so very tragic, I hope things are slowly getting better for you...
The poem itself was amazing, there was so much depth and emotion in this piece.
You did a wonderful job on such a tragic subject.

What a wonderful job you have done putting this tragedy to rhyme and portraying the utter sorrow and despair. I am sorry for your loss and the rest of your family as well. It is just not fair.....

Excellent!

First can i ask what is YANAKA? well i read this piece twice but i don't fully undestand the message on it, i think of a family or lost life? it has a dept!

keep it up!