Another fine display of the english language nice one chick. i got a couple new poems if you fancy checking them out. drop me a line sometime

Nice flow of words! it's such an original piece.. :)

Really dark n almost hopeless i love this poem

Very very very nice poem
i like the way every line is taken as a question
i love your poem

Not bad atall. I like the originality of this. I like the last line the best, and the line about Love.
Great Work.

It's also good to find a MyChem fan on here. If I'm wrong then I apologise.

President Dead

I absolutely loved this!
I enjoyed the wording and imagery used, and I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked very well.
You did an excellent job with this.

WOW!!
I loved this poem, so original and the flow was great!!
5/5

Hello
yes I did spare alot of time on it .
My name is crystal

I LOVEEEE Your poems theres just something about them that i love but keep up the good work and ill keep checking 2 see ur new ones
kait

Awesome! You're a great writer, thanks for the comment x

Wow! i think i like this one the best than all the others actually...i've never even seen a poem quite like this though. Love the way you wrote it with your thought on each word. Its so harsh n dark n sad n doomed at the same time...yet the one part..

Love? For that my soul I would sell

its unique to all the other lines in the poet, because its like a contridiction. you have so much hate yet would give your soul away for love. amazing, i love it. thanks for comments on my poems too. i'll try n read more of yours soon. i really like your style.

I absolutely love the way you wrote that, probably my favorite poem this week ^_^ 5/5

Verry good 5/5 :)

Such talent. It is a pleasure to read your poetry.

Nice! sounds like what a girl said to me today, haha good job, please stay in touch with me, i really like your poems