Awesome work, keep it up. 5/5

Extremely well done poem. It had a good flow and a very understandable message which many can relate too whether they were the helper or the one hurting. Nice!
Charisma*

Hey im one fo the girls from the comp.
this si pretty darn good. and im not trying to butter you up!

lol. keep it goin and I dont think i have anything to critique.

-emma

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Man! Great job with this...I love the repeating line and I loved the line in general. Great imagry and amazing talent. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun

Wow.. amazing poem.. perfect flow and rhyming.. written really well.. i love how you repeat the titles through out the poem.. its a nice touch.. great job!

5/5. I felt the emotion in this poem. GREAT WRITE!!

Apart from the spelling errors, i really liked this. Even though you repeat one line, it doesn't sound overused or cliched because each time it is written with a different feeling and intention. I am still trying to write this way! I liked the rhyme aswell (usually I'm not a big fan) it fit in and didn't come out as forced. Nice stuff :)