Should this be in love? no, i supose not, it is very dark. interseting use of repition, and a powerful last line. shame its about love, id rather it were about death of blood or something elsea little more morbid, i may have to write a morbid poem to make up for it.... anyway! i promise to stop writing pointless comments....ok so thats a lie, but i love you all the same.

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