I absolutely love this poem =) it sad and full of emotion..I think its great and the rhyming..I love it =) 5/5

Now, this is something amazing! I loved it! Great job sweetie!
xoxo

Damn!! this poem is soo amazing! i really envy ur talent .. keep on writting.. coz im looking forward to reading ur next poem! =p

5/5 !

I loved the last line and your flow was consistant the whole way through..
You never fail to disappoint me =)
Excellent hun
5/5
*Gem*

Reli gr8 poem so full of emotion i loved it and i love just readin thro ur peoms sometimes they always make me feel better. well u did gd agen well dne 5/5.Mazie.X
(ps thank you for the comment on my poem i took on bord wat u sed n i wrote it on sumfin a m8 sed 2 me n she a single teenage mother)x

Ah damn!
You know what i mean, lol.
You never disappoint me! Thats what i meant. My mind is all swirly today. I blame the antibiotics! lol
5/5 again!
*Gem*

Heyy;;
good job... this is for my other contest right?
Well this poem wasnt bad... i didnt really like it that much... and the ending was all that great. But it was okay... 3/5

Oh my gosh.. every poem i get just gets better and better.. i definitly chose a good winner! hehe lol.. i really like this poem.. the whole short and choppy lines.. totally my favorite style.. simple yet still you get your emotions out.. AMAZING JOB!! my favorite poem so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!