This is very true. I believe that success is how well you are respected not only by others but by yourself as well. It should not be measured by your power to earn a trophy or award but by your willingness to give. At the end of the day if you can say you have done your best, then that is the only success that matters. Great poem!

That was simply amazing! I don't know what to say. Well, maybe perhaps you could write more? Haha! I really liked it! Reminds me how awards are just things that remind us we once achieved some thing that was acknowleged. But it's really those little things that are the greatest rewards of all. Such as, family, friends and time spent with them. Anyway, great poem! I loved it!

This is an amazing poem, It's so true that in life everybody wants all the fame and fortune, but it's the things in life that are free that mean the most deep down and last the longest. excellent write 5/5

This was beautiful, absolutely STUNNING. The words you used were so perfect and fit together, the lines were flawless, I absolutely loved this one:
"When it is our own self we wish to idolize "

Great work.

--Steph

I really like this one 5/5 love linda

Good poem.. not my favorite.. but its still a great write.. the rhyming is good as well as the flow.. i cant tell you whats wrong with it or what makes me not like it as much.. its just not jumping out as me like your others