I like your style of writing keep it up i like your spin on fighting and they why you portray worriors

I like this portrayment of this poem. i like war poems and the out of the ordinary.(;

great work.

Tom

When I first read the title of this poem I wasn't sure if I was going to read it or not because I'm not normally a huge fan of that kind of stuff in that time period. But I really liked how you made this poem different. I liked how you talked about the closeness of the Romans thats something that I think humanity is missing now-a-days. The strength and connection to fight for their race/people when push comes to shove. Instead we just end up sitting back and letting other people do it for us. Maybe when things fall apart we will finally be able to get back to where we were and stand together and once again "hail Caesar".