Comments : Fight till the lights go out!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenny

    I really liked this poem. It's very inspiring

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Great job davey

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    I will fight till the lights go out.
    I will fight with the sword of my words.

    I liked this poem. thanks for sharing!
    take care,
    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Mimi

    I really like this poem. Your style is so cute. I love how its all sorta like in perspective of the knight in shining armor. Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    The rhyme scheme and flow were perfect, and the imagery was great.
    You did a fantastic job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    I love this poem! my fav of yours!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice write Dave
    5/5 your favorite friend
    Kate

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Your an amazing writer and you carry great skill. good job keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Whoa . Like it . For some reason, a knight in shining armour comes to mind :P

    yea thought i fight alone
    my hope and light are the best ever known

    BTW did you mean "Yeah though I fight alone" ? XD Cuhs` I was like Whaaa ? when I read that line . The flow was really good, and I just liked it .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Lol I really liked it! Kudos 5/5!

    -Liz-
    ~of life to live~

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lovely lovely write.soo true....very well worded n neat write...lol...even i hd a knight's image in my mind!:D
    Simple n Perfect..n flowed well too.great wrk!..another 5/5 as always!
    xxPoojaxx