by Cathy Jan 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
He lays in his bed plotting his life |
by Kelly
Ooooh good poem. I loves it:) |
It's very good, im a guy and I can relate. |
by Bryan
Well it is very good the way it is cathy but a few more stanzas wouldnt hurt, great flow, and i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!! |
by Darkbreath
Geez... this is a very good one.. I like the way you can describe the feelings of the two different people in it. It made me remember a lot. very good 5/5 |