Geez... this is a very good one.. I like the way you can describe the feelings of the two different people in it. It made me remember a lot. very good 5/5

Well it is very good the way it is cathy but a few more stanzas wouldnt hurt, great flow, and i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

It's very good, im a guy and I can relate.
5/5 Flows nicely and keeps you wanting to read it more, and never gets boring to read it more than once, very good poem!

Ooooh good poem. I loves it:)
Excellent story told from two very points of view. Regrets, and then looking forward. Its a very good piece the now and im sure it will be an amazing piece when its finished.

Kelly
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