Wow i really love this poem.. good imagery and great rhyme and flow...

Good use of vocabulary I really like this! It had a nice flow and the imagery was superb! Keep it up!

~Allis

The flow came on strong, to make us asking to read more. You did a fantastic job describing the girl, and all that came with her. The mood was pretty dim, but you made it work. 5/5

xoxo
Azshara (Katie =P)

I like it alot. though there could have been more medophors to hide what it ment..it was still good because i know what you were talking about and felt what went behind this to write it
5/5

I like this poem. I love the description within it and the imagery it creates. I think the second line, instead of respond it should be responce, although I know that doesn't rhyme, it's the word that fits there. Other than that, a really great poem. 5/5

Tammie

So beautiful...

*isabel*

This was a beautiful piece with lots of imagery and description. Enjoyed reading it. The first few lines pulled me in and made me want to keep reading. excellent work!

PEACE and BLESSINGS
~Shade127

Wow i read this poem and my imagination went crazy... i think that you are an amazing poet... It really made me think... you were so descpritive with your words!!!!

I love this stanza:

"Wings that are so cotton white,
Make perfect seem so perfectly right.
Too pure for us to simply hold,
Like shiny, flawless, heavy gold."