This poem made me laugh lol, It was filled with love yet not to serious excellent job 5/5

A baby cow is called a calf

^^I didn't get why that was in the poem. It could also use some structure. Other than that.. it was very well written. The flow was good as was the depth. Nice work. 4.6/5

Hey that woz a wonderful poem..i think you did such a wopnderful job and im glad ur sis lykes it..it made me think about my sis n how much i love them both..

keep up the good work 5/5

Mmyesh, I agree with mistressxsork; it needs some structure and the comment about a baby cow being called a calf doesn't really fit in.

But other than that it's pretty well-written, I think.
Very heartfelt, dear. And that's always a fantastic start for writing good poetry. =)

Keep it up, you aren't half bad! ;)