by Darkbreath Jan 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Every day I die a bit |
This is great in so many ways. I can definitely relate to the emotion and situation. The rhyme is strong and words flow nicely but the emotion is what stands out, the love and loss and despair. I love the end though with both it's hope(for the future) and a bit of resignation (now).Excellent. |