This is really good I think it's one of your best great job!

I love it!It is very smooth and relatable.I couldn't stop reading it.It takes a really good poem to catch my attention and you have done that.keep up the amazing work!5/5

<3Amber

My favorite lines are: To cry not tears,
But blood instead,
Have thoughts of death,
Running through your head
i think that it would have been better in stanzas!!!