Rachel..thank you for your comment on mine, first..I really appreciate it..and now...all I can say is wow..I know it shouldnt make a differnce, but I can't believe you are so young and write to eloquently about these things..wish I had written this, it's just how I'm feeling right now....beautiful, wonderful poem...brilliant....Luv Michelle :)

Well i must agree with everybody else.....this was a very good poem. I think you to be very talented....and im sure others agree with me. Awesome job on this poem! Look foward to more....

-Seanny