OMG that was soo soo soo ok sooo (last one I promise) sooo cool I loved it so much! Beutifully done.. (can you look at mine?) you may like them... like I like this one..

Wow i love it!! very good 5/5

This is excellent. very nicely written, GREAT FLOW! i voted 5/5... how nice, this is really really good... I'd like to check out osm eof your other poems too
-Marina.