This poem that you hvae wrote is great. i love to read new poems and this one is a very beautifully written one.

i gave it a 5. i will comment and vote on more. hope you do the same.

David

Great write. I like the usage of time. This is a very good piece. I am glad I got to read it. Take care Cindy

"Time is the one thing you'll always have,
so live every second to the very last."

Such an inspiring piece Gastlee!
It may be short but it has a such a in depth message beneath the lines.
Well done =)
5/5
*Gem*

This is deep and very strong! 5/5

Superb poem and Im sure I will give you max. The message is very clear and its very beautiful. I have a little suggestion

The line "Time has no finish" seems to be odd because finish is not a noun, so instead you could use a gerund like "finishing" or a noun like "end".

But it is a great poem
Tc
Fsams

I enjoyed this...each word written had so much depth and meaning, with an insanely great message behind the overall piece...beautiful.

Great poem! I'm a muslim and one of our heros(Immam Ali) said: "Time is like a sward if you don't cut it it cuts you"

This poem interprets what time really is and saying you shouldnt waste it

Time is a force
with unbeatable energy

is saying u cant go back in time or try and out run it cause its always going to be there.

i like this poem good job