I liked the way you repeated certain words, it really got your point across nicely, such a sad poem hun. But you did a fab job on it
5/5
*Gem*

Girl i was already in an upset moment and i just read this and the look on my face was so pitiful LOL i like this poem. I had to get a grip on myself then i started laughing at myself LOL. We all feel like that sometimes. 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem....i feel like this alot....but hopefully you will find happiness.

''The world will soon
be covered in my tears''

I love those lines!!
I thought they had great impact.
The depth and emotion behind the words are clear to see.
Very sad, but a pleasure to read.

Wow. i really REALLY like this poem.. a very enjoyable read.. i really love how you say your tears are enough to flood the ocean and cover the world.. very unique..

A really great flow and i especially like those

But if I done that
I'd flood the ocean
cry each day
more and more
add to the river
that river flows

Keep it up hun
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Laura

Wow i love your poems they are all so awesome i love the ending of this poem the best through with the part "The world will soon
be covered in my tears" thats my favourite line lol good job and well im sure you heard this before from me but thanks for the comment lol

keenan