Short life lived

by finally just me   Jan 6, 2007


If u've ever lost someone
you know how i feel
it just keeps hitting me
like omg he's gone for real

i wish i could talk to him
just one more time
to tell him how many hearts
where broken including mine

to tell him just how much he really was loved
maybe he just needed someone there
does he even know
how many people care

well now he's safe
b/c he's in gods home
i hope now he'll
never feel alone

this poem goes out to Jake Seene
who committed suicide on Tuesday January 2nd
2007! He was a great person and we all miss and love him! My feelings go out to his family and friends!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Ok a pointer, dont use slang words in your poems, and capitalize the i's and beggining of the sentences and use commas and piriods, but its a great poem, 5/5!!!