Wow. Thats all I need to say. Wow.

Matt

PS: Wow

Oh my gosh!!!! i am like obssessed with the first stanza!! i don't exactly know why, but it's just like BAM!! anyways, this is a great poem, ur an amazing writer!

Forever*Yours

This was freaking amazing!!
The wording used was breath taking, the imagery oustanding and the flow was perfect.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme muchly.
You did an excellent job on this!