Ive never reallly cum across a poem like this b4 great job def got my 5 vote keep writing n take care sarah x

Thanks for the comment. It's nice to be appreciated. This is a great poem. It has a special flow in it. 5/5

Short and sharp but managed to keep it smooth well done. Doing well but lets hear some happy poems dave!

In "love", it's not what you will gain, it's what she/he will gain. it's not the love you receive. it's the love you give. of course to be loved back is such a beautiful feeling. but unfortunately (or maybe fortunately) we can't force others to love us.
All in all, a lover must feel just the way you had mentioned in your poem "I owe you anyway"(a pretty good poem from a wise soul)!

keep shining,
Marjan

This is another one of your great poems. I greatly enjoy reading your poems. They have all been wonderful, and this one is no exception. 5/5

Kalee

Pretty deep, the flow could have been a little better. the strucutre was pretty good, a wee-rounded poem