by kiara Jan 6, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The tides are changing |
by heather
Aww that's awesome! i love the way u word things...so peaceful to me...lol if that makes sense. but thanks for the comment on mine! ;) |
by David
Well thats ok if your ok now. but if you ever need anyone just tell me. i'll be there for you. |
by Stacey
Sounds much better now. well done on a great poem! |
by Stacey
It feels unfinished, like you meant to keep writing, but your flow stopped. or you meant to do it later and you couldnt. i think it needs another few lines because an abrupt ending like that doesnt complement your magnificent writing style, or th eperfect flow :) |