by Leah Jan 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
He had hit rock bottem |
by C Cattaway
I think I'd have liked to have heard more about why she was on the verge of suicide.. or not so much why, but about how he had saved her as much as she had saved him.. I felt that it built up to that, but then dissipated.. although the whole poem, and the concept of it, is beautiful. You have a wonderful heart, to understand how to portray the pain that you did.. Very well done, hunny. xx |