Was This Love

by Goran Rahim   Jan 6, 2007


In your blood,
I found betrayal.
In your eyes,
I found shame.
In your heart,
I found hate.
In your smile,
I found a lie.
Now
you tell me
Was this love?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This, for such a short poem, was so well written, and was straight to the point using the right words. Another great poem by you. =]

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Simple but strong. Each word is very powerful and holds a lot of meaning. Great job 5/5 !

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Beautiful, i love how you can express so much and really hit your readers hard in just a few words, great job as always. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I don't always enjoy reading short poems due to there lack of imagery and emotion but i loved this one and there was great imagery and deep emotion. well done, you really did yourself proud with this one, my friend
    xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Wow. Short but VERY good!! It was so amazing how you could do this in such little words! 5/5