by Bryan
For sucj a short poem this was very good, great emotions trapped in such a short poem, loved it goran, great job, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!! |
by The Undoing
Love hurts...sometimes we hate the people we love...but we know deep inside that we would never harm them, or want them to be harmed. Touching stuff, tough. Wellwritten, know where this comes from, but tough it out, I'm one of those "It happens for a reason guys". |
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by jello
This was a really good poem...love hurts doesn't it? I hate it...but i love this. it was so short but it still very emotional. good job 5/5 |
by emptysole
Hey it might be short but had a lot of meaning great work bravo=] |
by Sandra D
I love this poem! tht's exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me... wutev, great job!! |
by Taylor
Sounds like love to me.. haha. I can't lie, I wasn't as astounded as I usually am by your stuff. Perhaps because I've never felt that way before. Its got a great concept.. perhaps if you took more time.. unless it was meant to be a simple poem. I don't know. Sorry. |
5/5. Wow. Short but VERY good!! It was so amazing how you could do this in such little words! 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
I don't always enjoy reading short poems due to there lack of imagery and emotion but i loved this one and there was great imagery and deep emotion. well done, you really did yourself proud with this one, my friend |
by Mousie
Beautiful, i love how you can express so much and really hit your readers hard in just a few words, great job as always. 5/5 |
Simple but strong. Each word is very powerful and holds a lot of meaning. Great job 5/5 ! |
by Tammie
This, for such a short poem, was so well written, and was straight to the point using the right words. Another great poem by you. =] |