by emptysole Jan 6, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Don't be afraid too ask for help, |
I like this one becasue i have 2 best friends that would do anything for me |
Very well written!! i love this poem! its awesome + has great emtions!! keep it up!! |
by Bryan
A few capitalization mistakes and on the 6th line (lose) should me (loss), but other than that its a very good poem, a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |