It's different from your other work. It's good to broaden your horizen (sp?) because that's what a good writer does! Thay can write about whatever comes into their head and still make it sound fantastic! Great job Gem!
xoxo

I was goint to tell you to read this line.

You never fail to disappoint me =)

LOL i knew what you meant, but I don't know if you noticed how you worded it. LOL I was like, hmmm...heehee
By the way, this short story is beautiful. you did an amazing job! I really enjoyed it Gem. You never fail to amaze me. lol Good job!
Charisma*

Beautiful and unique. Nice job as always.

Gem Loved this. I really did. I love love stories with happy endings. Excellent.

Very strong AMAZING stuff wow love the energy the truth everything.

Omg i loved this!! this was so good gem! it was different and unique. it was really touhing and sad at the start.. some of the bits i could relate to.. and ended so beautifully. it was really reative. great job! =) keep it up. xx

This is spectacular! you are amazing! stay in touch!

~rikki~

The repition of "i love you" added so much to the piece and it was truely incredible.

5/5

-Erin

This is beautiful writing.

Awwwwwww i think im gonna cry

Awwwwwww it is sad i gave u a 5 out of 5 awwwwwwwwww

Awwwww! super cute gemma! i love your writing, its so amzing, did you win the conest?

---tara

Glad u posted this story
i enjoyed every bit of it
it was amazing great brilliant
i loved it well done

This was amazing. i loved it. I always like to read love poems and stuff like that. U did a really good job keep it up!

LYRIC

Aw this ones adorable. I want a hug from a guy now!! Hahaha

This was such a beautiful poem. I could not stop reading it. It kept me right there and intrested. I hope you won that contest because i think u deserve it.

~~~~~Chained4ever~~~~~~5/5

It is beautiful!!

Such a sweet LOVE STORY.

Amazing. as well as all of your other work =]