by Liz Jan 6, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
I walk these lonely streets |
by Gasttlee
Wonderful emotion and truth to it! 5/5 |
by Tripp
You had a very strong poweful and intense beginning...but near the end you sort of lost the intensity. did you stop writing in the middle of this? eh, whatever. still an overall good poem. 5/5 ;) |
Very well written!! i love this poem! its awesome + has great emtions!! keep it up!! |