This is a great poem.
I can't stop the way I feel
Or keep my heart confined
This is so true. We can not stop the feelings of our hearts.

Okay, so it's good but not my fav. It lacks that conviction and power your other poems have. Not enough descriptive words I guess. But there was one line that really stood out.

I don't want you as a memory

That was well put. Nice!
Charisma*

Not my fav either but a nice job as you always do. It is hard when you're forced with a title and therfore a subject. The most awesome poetry comes, I believe from inspiration. The part of this one I like the best is:
"How should I start to move on
When you're always on my mind?
I can't stop the way I feel
Or keep my heart confined"

:)

OMG! This is soo great! I can so relate to it! Wow keep it up girl!
prepxskater

Ur poems are literally flawless wish i could write like you ahha then maybe people would actually comment my stuff ahha.

Hey, thanks for entering this by the way. I did like it, but i know you and your best. Hope I didn't sound harsh in my first comment. I was like. "man she's gonna be so angry." lol but you know i was just being honest. can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Charisma*

Hey this was also really good. lot of emotion in this one. well done xx

I know where you're coming from! I loved it! You say the greatest things in simple words! I loved it!
xoxo

Thats amazing..... this is like me, no one wants to be a memory and im fighting hard not to be but if i lose this one i lose everything.... this one hit home :'((( its a fantastic poem i enjoyed reading it and it hurt meaning you did a damn good job writing it :')