Death is Better

by why is life so miserable   Jan 6, 2007


Sometimes when i see my life
fading away as I'm
cutting my veins
with my only friend
my best friend
the razor
and i see my blood hit the floor
I start thinking about DEATH
and how better it is than living a life
with pain, fear, and depression.
Why not just kill yourself
and watch how easily
the pain goes away
as you life slowly backs away
from you as your eyes
suddenly shut down.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Dont back away! write your feelings down, they are encouraging to others to continue there life, nice poem...hit some cord within me...

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Wat i suggest to start with is don't have at the bottom plz comment or whatever. puts it off. if someone likes the poem they will comment. don't tell them too. it wrecks the flow of the poem. well makes it less enjoyable.

    but this was well done for your first poem. we only get better.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem but i would put it into verses not just one big paragraph but it still has a wonderful flow to it good job and thx for the comment

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This kinda lost me a little but i know what you meant.. Its very good for the first poem you've ever wrote.. An thanks for the comment on mine.. idk what you meant by this is real but all my poems are real exept one..

  • 17 years ago

    by adroit

    It's a very sad poem, but it shines, I guess, in it's own darkness.

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