Wow.. i really like this poem.. a little creepy lol but still written really well.. the only suggestions i have is to work on the last stanza.. which is really good its just a lot longer of a stanza than the rest of the poems are so it doesnt really fit

Great poem 5/5 keep it up.

Hey rona I just wanted to thank you for the advise that you left in the comment on of my poems...thanxs

Wow this poem is really excellent. The flow is amazing and the meaning is very deep. It's kinda scary in a way also, it was an excellent read, great job 5/5

Incredible,absolutely incredible.the flow was excellent and the wording was very well chosen.once again a 5/5
--lexie

This is a scarey dark poem. You do have a way with words. The flow of this one is not as good as your other ones but none the less, you still did a nice job. I will be waiting to read what you come up with next.

I really liked it! yea i do gotta agree wit everyone else kinda scary but all in all really good! 5/5 keep writing

I really liked it! yea i do gotta agree wit everyone else kinda scary but all in all really good! 5/5 keep writing

Excellent job! The words you used are very discriptive. I enjoyed reading your poem.