Burned Bridges

Okay so .. i absolutey love this poem dude!! its just.. idk the words and everything ahh lol i just lovelovelove it.. i had to read some parts over again to find the flow though, you should put commas in your lines since their so long..

and yeahh i lovelovelove this line times2847582920

"Bridges aren't far off from burning to the ground
Smoke and ash will tell the story of what we never found"

its amazing! :]P

Hehe, did you enter the burning bridges contest too. I haven't written mine yet but it looks like a hard act to folloe ;)
Excellent work as always my dear
5/5
*Gem*

Lovely! I loved it! And yes, I agree with Rachel, we all do forget! I loved it girl! Perfect!
xoxo

I wanted to remind everyone to vote on this excellent poem. Sometimes we get so caught up in the beauty of the poem and are anxious to leave our comments and we forget to vote..........like I just did so I came back. :)

Very beautifully done. I especially like the following parts:
Almost to that point where the flame will kiss the wood
Watch what we once had become ashes where it stood

Another pain, another tear and it will be our last
Left to reminisce upon our blazing past

Bridges aren't far off from burning to the ground
Smoke and ash will tell the story of what we never found

Great metaphors and imagery. Definetly a 5/5 (aren't they all?)

~Clapping~ ! ~In awe~