Whats wronge with me

by Laybelled with a name   Jan 6, 2007


I don't know whats wrong with me.
I can't live, I can't see,
Without your touch,
Or holding me,
I don't know whats wrong with me

I don't know how to say,
What I feel, emotions so obscure,
Don't give me a second chance,
I'm not worthy,

And I cant say,
Whats holding me down,
To not kiss you back,
I am mad,
I am so insane
And I'm ashamed
for being so.....

I don't know why you love me
So apart, but I'm in you heart
Please don't give me a second chance
As I'd be mad
To say no right now.

Your the best thing
I'm the worse
Your amazing
I'm like a curse
Don't try to fix me
I'm not broken
The tears will dry.

And I don't know
What is this curse
Your the best thing
I am the worst

You'd take me back in a heartbeat
So why do you cry?
And I'm so ashamed for being so....

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  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very self pitying poem. I can be nothing but honest and this isn't my type of poem, I guess just personally the subject doesn't appeal to me.
    It was good yeah, just not for me, sorry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is kind of sad, but there's so much emotion! good job!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Yep i agree good write keep it up best of luck on getting more r/r/c on your poems :-]

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    This is a great, heartfelt and beautiful, yet sad piece. The feelings that are in this poem are understandable and easily related to. This is a great piece. *5/5 - Athame

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This is beautiful, amazingly heartfelt, and so realistic. The feeling here is so understandable and I can very much relate to the message. I really love this poem. Great job! Keep up the good work!

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