Wow,it's really good honey,especially

don't know why you love me
So apart, but I'm in you heart
Please don't give me a second chance
As I'd be mad

those,good job,keep it up and don't bring yourself down,when you need a friend,don't forget i can be....

This is beautiful, amazingly heartfelt, and so realistic. The feeling here is so understandable and I can very much relate to the message. I really love this poem. Great job! Keep up the good work!

This is a great, heartfelt and beautiful, yet sad piece. The feelings that are in this poem are understandable and easily related to. This is a great piece. *5/5 - Athame

Yep i agree good write keep it up best of luck on getting more r/r/c on your poems :-]

This is kind of sad, but there's so much emotion! good job!

Forever*Yours

Very self pitying poem. I can be nothing but honest and this isn't my type of poem, I guess just personally the subject doesn't appeal to me.
It was good yeah, just not for me, sorry.