by Tylor Dent Jan 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
She has the kiss of an angel. |
The poem was good. One grip though...Although the message was there, you need to fix the way you have it set out. |
by ChelCBayB
WoW this is such a true poem! I love it! GREAT job! |
Line 11 it should be neck* not next and have you been listening to Ne-Yo thats in one of his famous songs. i really love the realness and the intensity. you're an excellent writer WOW keep it up jay jay. and comment sum more of my stuff old nad new if u can thnxs. |
by olivia
This is the best one ive read so far. its good!! |