Please Take A Second Look (to all poetry readers)

by myshiningstar14   Jan 6, 2007


Do you ever feel like people walk right by you,
not bothering to take a second glance.
They see that title to that poem, and think
"Ah I ain't got time."
Little do they know how much that poem
means,
and here you sit your heart
screaming,
pleading for someone to take a second look.

I don't write for my own amusement,
just to hear myself type day after day;
so I can get lost in the beauty of life.
Sometimes it's like I write so much,
and no one cares,
they say they love my poetry but rarely
do I see but one comment.
It's like I'm writing to a world,
who refuses to write back.
what is it that I lack?

You work so hard,
but its like you never get very far.
People expect you to succeed;
but how can you when they sit there and
watch the world pass you by.
They're stuck in their own world not giving
anything, to even think of taking a second
look.

I promise I have so much to offer.
I've cried all these tears
and written all these poems;
so the world will know that some
pains are worth living.

So as your eyes scroll down the page
of not a poem, but of my soul
realize this: I'm worth your time,
I'm worth every single dime you got.
Just please take a second look.

*lissa*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Amazing.
    You really got the point across and as Tripp said, i think a lot of poets on this site can easily relate to this piece.
    You took the thoughts out of thier heads and put it down on paper.
    Excellent
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    This is so true! good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    It's true. I hate it when your pour your heart into a poem, and it doesn't get one look, even if you ask people to....it's really annoying. I can identify, as I'm sure almost the rest of the site can identify, with this. almost everyone wants people to read their stuff, and comment on it, be it good or bad. it's funny I was just looking through my favorites thinking that I haven't done that for awhile, I saw you had a new one, and look what it's about haha.

    good job

    Tripp